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The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the percentage of regional household recycling rates in three different countries from 2005 to 2015.
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,it is clearly seen that
UK
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 and Germany experienced an upward
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,
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 the
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 for France experienced a downward
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. In detail,the percentage of UK started at 35%
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and increased slightly to 40% in 2007.The proportion maintained the same level between 2007 and 2009.After that,recycling rates in
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growth
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 dramatically to 55% in 2011,and the
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 increased gradually to 60% in the final year.In
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 of Germany,the percentage was 20% in 2005,and increased steadily to 32% in 2009.The
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 climbed significantly to 45% from 2009 to 2011.
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 rates
rised
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 up to 58% in 2015.
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,the proportion in France started at 50%
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and decreased steeply to 30% between 2005 and 2013.After the
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 dropped to 30%,that was increased to 40% in the
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 year.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • household recycling rates
  • trend analysis
  • comparison
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • plateau
  • progress
  • environmental implications
  • rate
  • peak
  • upward/downward trend
  • percentage
  • consistently
  • period
  • surpass
  • level off
  • stagnate
  • benchmark
  • time frame
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management
  • recycle
  • dispose
  • landfill
  • renewable resource
  • conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • green initiative
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