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The charts below show the change in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in housholds in oun country between 1920 to 2019.

The charts below show the change in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in housholds in oun country between 1920 to 2019.
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The first line graph illustrates the percentage of
households
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 equipped with electrical
appliances
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 between 1920 and 2019,
while
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 the second graph shows the number of
hours
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 spent on house chores per week during the same period.
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, there was a significant increase in the
adoption
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 of
household
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 electric
appliances
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 over the years. By 1980, refrigerators reached near-full
adoption
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, with almost 100% of
households
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 owning one. Vacuum cleaner usage followed a similar trend, reaching 100%
adoption
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 by 2000.
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, the
adoption
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 of washing machines grew steadily, reaching 70% by 1960.
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, from 1960 to 2000, there was a slight dip in washing machine usage to 65%.
Afterward
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, growth resumed, and by 2019, 75% of
households
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 owned a washing machine.
Secondly
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, the number of
hours
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 spent on housework saw a linear decline throughout the same period. In 1920,
households
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 spent approximately 50
hours
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 per week on chores, but
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 figure dropped steadily over the years, reaching about 10
hours
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 per week by 2019. The increasing
adoption
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 of
household
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appliances
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, which reduce the time and effort required for cleaning and other tasks, is likely a key factor behind
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 dramatic 75% reduction in housework
hours
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. In conclusion, as the
adoption
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 of electric
appliances
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 grew over time, the number of
hours
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 spent on
household
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 chores fell significantly.
This
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 suggests a strong relationship between the availability of
labor-saving
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 devices and the reduction in manual
household
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 tasks.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, appliances, hours, adoption, household with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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