The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The

map-process

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below

illustrate

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illustrates

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how biofuel is made in the

environments

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environment

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.

Overall

, there are 8 stages in the whole

ethanol producing

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ethanol-producing

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process, beginning with energy and

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ending

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with emitting

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carbon dioxide.

To begin

, the energy is produced by combining

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sunlight and carbon dioxide

then

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grow of

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plants and

tree

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trees

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in the forest.

Following

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this

by harvesting of these grown plants which

used

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to pre-process.

Next,

pre-processed material is used for producing

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cellulose.

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stage is complete, start

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producing

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sugars from

proceeded

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the proceeded

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cellulose. Eventually, added of microbes to proceeded sugars in order to

emitting of

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emit

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ethanol. Ethanol is

essential

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an essential

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elements

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element

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in different

industry

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industries such

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as

vehicle

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vehicles

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,

truck

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trucks

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and

plane

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planes

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. The cycle will complete after

producing

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the production

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of carbon dioxide from these industries and emitted

in

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into

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the air to contribute again in energy.