Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Task 1. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graphs illustrate the

number

of people moving to the main

citiy

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city

in

certain

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country, categorized by the

reason

for

this

action including employment, study, family/friends and

adventure

.

Overall

, it is clear the

number

of people moving to urban

area

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areas

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for

persuing

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pursuing

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career

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careers

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had dominate

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others. Many individuals came to study was relatively low at the start, it increased

substantialy

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substantially

to the same as employment in the

end

.

While

those who needed to live with

friend

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friends

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and went

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on adventure

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adventure

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adventures

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in the city had the lowest

number

. In 2000, those who went to

capital

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the capital

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city for

job

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the job

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had the

greastest

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greatest

number

at approximately 60,000. The

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rose consistently to reach its peak by 2010, with above 90,000 before

experienced

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experiencing

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a

dropped

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to roughly 8,700. The

number

of people

allocating

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allocated

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for

edcation

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education

had

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the

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relatively lower at 20,000

initailly

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initially

, it

suged

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rose

rapidly to the same

number

of

the

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apply

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job

figure

at the

end

of

given

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period.

In contrast

,

family

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the family

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reason

figure

began at above 10,000 in 2000, followed by a gradual increase between 2005 and 2010,

then

remained flatted at above 20,000 the

last

five years.

While

,

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those who preferred

adventure

started at the lowest point as family

figure

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figures

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but had a stable minimal incline throughout the 15 period years. In summary, both

number

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of

carrer

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careers

and study reasons had the same highest

number

at the

end

, but

education

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the education

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reason

began with

lower

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a lower

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number

.

While

Family/

freind

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friends

and

adventure

reasons started at the lowest point,

additionally

experiencing minimal incline, family

reason

had

higher

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the higher

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number

at the

end

.