Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Task 1. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs illustrate the
number
of people moving to the main citiy
in Correct your spelling
city
certain
country, categorized by the Add an article
a certain
reason
for this
action including employment, study, family/friends and adventure
.
Overall
, it is clear the number
of people moving to urban area
for Fix the agreement mistake
areas
persuing
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pursuing
career
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careers
had dominate
others. Many individuals came to study was relatively low at the start, it increased Wrong verb form
has dominated
substantialy
to the same as employment in the Correct your spelling
substantially
end
. While
those who needed to live with friend
and went Fix the agreement mistake
friends
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on adventure
adventure
in the city had the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
adventures
number
.
In 2000, those who went to capital
city for Add an article
the capital
job
had the Add an article
the job
a job
greastest
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greatest
number
at approximately 60,000. The figure
rose consistently to reach its peak by 2010, with above 90,000 before experienced
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experiencing
dropped
to roughly 8,700. The Replace the word
drop
number
of people allocating
for Wrong verb form
allocated
edcation
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education
had
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was
the
relatively lower at 20,000 Correct article usage
apply
initailly
, it Correct your spelling
initially
suged
rapidly to the same Correct your spelling
rose
number
of the
job Correct article usage
apply
figure
at the
end
of given
period. Add an article
a given
the given
In contrast
, family
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the family
reason
figure
began at above 10,000 in 2000, followed by a gradual increase between 2005 and 2010, then
remained flatted at above 20,000 the last
five years. While
,
those who preferred Remove the comma
apply
adventure
started at the lowest point as family figure
but had a stable minimal incline throughout the 15 period years.
In summary, both Fix the agreement mistake
figures
number
of Correct article usage
the number
carrer
and study reasons had the same highest Correct your spelling
careers
number
at the
end
, but education
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the education
reason
began with lower
Add an article
a lower
the lower
number
. While
Family/freind
and Correct your spelling
friends
adventure
reasons started at the lowest point, additionally
experiencing minimal incline, family reason
had higher
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the higher
a higher
number
at the
end
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, reason, adventure, end, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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