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The graph below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.

The graph below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.
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The bar chart represents
amount
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the amount
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 of produced carbon dioxide per passenger for a
kilometer
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kilometre
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 for various types of transportation in
European
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the European
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 Union. The Pie
cahrt
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chart
 illustrates the proportion of
money
 spent by
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the Eurpoean
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Eurpoean
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European
 Union on multiple
ransport
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transport
 means.
Overall
, it can be observed that
air crafts
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aircraft
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 are responsible for
highest
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the highest
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 production of CO2 in
atmosphere
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,
while
 most of
European
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the European
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 Union budget spent on improving roads. Air transportation produces close to 375
grams
 of carbon dioxide per person for every
kilometer
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kilometre
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 of trip.
Passanger
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Passenger
 cars
producing
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 nearly 3 times less than
aircrafts
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aircraft
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,
while
 buses
makes
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 only around 75
grams
 of carbon dioxide per 1
kilometer
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kilometre
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.
Martime
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Maritime
 emitted
same
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the same
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 amount of gas, by making only 100
grams
 together. Coaches hitting the lowest point among all transportation means
,
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 is just under 50
grams
. More than half of separated
money
were
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 spent on roads,
while
one third
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 of it was meant to improve railways. Public
trasnport
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transport
 got only 10
percent
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per cent
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 of
whole
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the whole
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money
,
by
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apply
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making it
third
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the third
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 lowest
invested
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investment
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 among others. Ports got only 2
percent
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per cent
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 of
invetsed
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invested
money
. Intermodal, inland waterway and airport got 1
percent
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per cent
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 each, the rest of 2
percnetages
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percentage
percentages
 remains unknown.
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