The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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The diagram clarifies the manufacturing process of
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that is
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used for building production.
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, there are seven stages, linear process and man-made, beginning from digging the clay and finishing as transportation on tracks.
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, clay is mined from soils like the raw and main material by a digger. The next part is grinding the clay into small pieces by the metal grid and sending them by roller. After that, sand and water are added to our substance, and there are two ways to make
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. The first one is cropped by a wire cutter.
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the second one is put in the mould and made into forms. The
bricks
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are packed in one big form in containers to remove the extra water they are kept for between 1 and 2 days. After drying, the water necessary to heat in big kilns started at a temperature of 200–980 Celsius and finished at 870–1300 Celsius. The forms need to be kept in the cooling chamber for 24–72 hours. The
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stages are packaging the
bricks
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and putting them in tracks for delivery.
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  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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