The chart below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie diagram below illustrates data on the location and category of
dance
classes
minor people in Australia presently participate.
Change preposition
in.
Overall
, there are 4 locations of dance
classes
, Private Sudios
, Community Correct your spelling
studios
Halls
, School Halls
, College-based
Studios. The most significant location young people usually use is the Private Studios with around 48%, Correct word choice
and College-based
However
, the lowest is College-based studios with only 10%. School Halls
and Community Halls
are
are almost equal, School Unnecessary verb
apply
Halls
is approximately 24%, and Community Halls
is 18%.
There are 3 type
of Change to a plural noun
types
dance
classes
, Ballet, Tap, and Modern with a different of
Change preposition
apply
an
age group. Ballet has the most attention from children under 11 with roughly 600 Correct article usage
apply
kid
and the lowest of Fix the agreement mistake
kids
age
between 11 to 16. Tap and Fix the agreement mistake
ages
Modren
dances have Correct your spelling
Modern
higher
amount of teenagers than Add an article
a higher
the
ballet.
In the end, all of Correct article usage
apply
this
information is about the location of dance
classes
and the type of dances.Submitted by Endo on
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