# 61. The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel

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The table data illustrates how the mode of travel changed

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1985 to 2000. (Where?) Generally, compared to 1985,

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travelled more in 2000, and they

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on private cars for commuting. Cars were the most popular mode of transport in England in both years. In 1985 the average

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travelled by English people by car was 3199

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and in 2000 it was 4806

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, we can see that taxis were the least popular mode of transport.

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the

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travelled by taxi in 2000 was three times greater than in 1985, in that year there were only 42

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per person, which was almost the same as travelling by bicycle. Some modes of travel,

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as walking and cycling, did not change significantly between 1985 and 2000.

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the table, fewer people used the local bus in 2000 than in 1985. Only 274

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were travelled by bus in 2000, 55

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less than in 1985.

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distance

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buses,

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, have become increasingly popular over time. In 2000, each person travelled 124

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on long-

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buses, compared with only 54

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in 1985.

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, Britons travelled a greater

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in 2000 than in 1985. Clearly, cars were the most popular means of transport.

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