The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the
percentage
of people
in Australia about the reasons for using the internet
and classified
the Wrong verb form
classify
people
based on age
.
Overall
, emailing was the main reason for browsing the internet
. Additionally
, most of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
from all divided age
groups used
Wrong verb form
use
internet
for sending Correct article usage
the internet
emails
. Moreover
, young people
browse the internet
for social networking compared with paying the bills online or online banking.
Sending emails
was the main purpose for using the internet
in Australia. All the people
in Australia used the Internet
for sending their emails
whereas
more than 60% of people
paid their online bills or banking. Moreover
, the lowest percentage
(around 60%) of Australians were active in social networking.
Regarding social networking, younger were using the Internet
more than any other age
group. The age
between 15-24 years was a higher percentage
(more than 80%) while
more than 20% of people
were 65 years or more. Furthermore
, in terms of paying online bills or online banking, children and older were less active. Nevertheless
, 25-34 years old people
used the internet
for this
which was the highest percentage
in this
category. Moreover
, more than 80% of people
from all age
groups sent their emails
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, internet, age, emails with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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