Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development? (Write 250 words.)

I have ever seen the

university

’s ranking on many social media sites where the Ivy League group gained the top 10 highest-ranking

universities

in the world, and most of them are from developed countries. In my opinion,

this

competition has many advantages in the education field. International students want to apply for a higher degree in a top-ranking

university

because they trust the quality of the course, which has

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intensive courses,

research

projects, and professional professors who advise them.

Therefore

, these are good profiles for applying for jobs in the future.

For example

, my former roommate achieved a scholarship for a master’s degree in mathematics from Leeds

University

, United Kingdom, in 2020 and recently graduated

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last

year.

While

at the

university

, she got good suggestions from her professor about the

university

’s life and her mathematics project. Later, she gained good grades in the program, which could apply for a high-level job. So, worldwide

universities

try to get a high ranking by developing their programs, scholarships and

research

in various fields, which can attract students.

In addition

, the high-quality

university

not only has the

research

and development projects to support the country’s development but

also

supports the students’ facilities when they are at the

university

.

For instance

, when I was a student at Thammasat

University

, I ever used fitness classes, yoga rooms, bicycle rentals, and libraries in my

university

when I had free time, and my stress

were

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decreased.

Therefore

, these are why high school students want to learn in a good quality

university

and many

universities

develop their infrastructure. In conclusion, these competitions can increase

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education’s

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quality, and job

opportunity

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. In my opinion, if the country

want

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to be a developed country in the future, the government should support

these

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competitive

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by

increase

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the annual budget

to

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every

universities

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for supporting

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these

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research

and development and improve to be

better

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society.