In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, big cities offer different job positions

due to

the great number of companies,

also

there are cultural activities,

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life

, different type of transportation, more hospitals and opportunities to study. Because of that more

people

from

countryside

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the countryside

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are moving to the

city

therefore

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, therefore

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, their population are decreasing.

This

has a negative impact both

for

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on

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the

countryside

and

for

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on

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the cities as well. As regards cities, they may collapse

due to

the increase

of

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in

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population from the

countryside

and small towns. The presence of

people

looking for opportunities could generate more

people

living

in

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on

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the street

hence

increase

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the

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crime and violence. The government should have specific politics to support all the

people

that

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are moving to the

city

. Respect

to

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the

countryside

is negative because there is less workforce in productive areas. It is true that the

city

allows access to different

thing

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,

whereas

the

countryside

cannot,

such

as a better quality of

life

, culture,

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nightlife

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life

and better opportunities to work and to study.

However

, the

countryside

is extremely necessary to cities’ economies so their

basics

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needs and

the

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quality of

life

it

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should be satisfied in order to prevent them to leave from their own place. In my

opinion

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I would say that living in the

countryside

is hard. I lived there for a

while

and unfortunately

due to

the lack of

schools

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schools,

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I had to move to the

city

.

Moreover

, if I wanted to go shopping or to go to the cinema I had to go to the

city

.

Consequently

, teenagers and young

people

prefer

leaving

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their

hometown

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hometowns

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.