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The pie charts below showshow preferred social media channels for youth in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below showshow preferred social media channels for youth in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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supplied
 pie charts accounted types of social media channels for youth in the United Kingdom and what they preferred from 2012 to 2017.
overall
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present
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 not that much
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change in the five years,
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however
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 the obvious large segment in both chats is
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TV , which
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 slightly more
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then
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 three
fifths
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 in 2012 and it increased
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small
precentage
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percentage
 to
be
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45% in 2017.
secondaly
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secondary
secondly
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become
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The print to be in level 2 ,by
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a 20
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%
different
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.
Moreover
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the
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radio in
the
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2012
is
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was
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 seven
on
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ten and in
the
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2017 is four to ten , And
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digital is six on ten in
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2012 unlike the 2017 when it
becom
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became
 less
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then
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than
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 fifth. The rest of
cinema
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the cinema
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 and
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the outdoor
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outdoor
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is
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are
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 the same in both
pies
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parties
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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