The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts provide details regarding 3 matters for usage of the Internet in Australia's population split by 5
age
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groups.
Overall
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, it can be seen emailing took the highest place among the reasons,
while
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there are similar levels in percentages of emailing and paying bills.
According to
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the information, social media has the lowest proportion, over 40% in the total Internet consumption and percentages by
age
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this
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figure decreases significantly from 100% to just over 20% about 5 times decline
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the population ageing is increasing. Looking at the other two using kind of the Internet in more detail, it is evident that emailing is the leader with 70% of the whole users which has the highest rate in the 40-60 and over 65
age
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groups at about 80%. Both two groups below 40
age
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make up 60% of sending emails. The same ratios even the levels of percentages are experienced in online paying bills over the ages.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • predominant
  • usage patterns
  • highlighting variations
  • compare and contrast
  • primary reasons
  • identify differences
  • age brackets
  • usage purposes
  • popularity
  • online shopping
  • banking
  • Internet use
  • age groups
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