the chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of education setting in the uK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph illustrates the proportion of male and female
teachers
in six education types in the British in 2010. The six education types are nursery or pre-school
, primary school
, secondary school
, college, private training institute, and university.
It can be clearly seen that the
each type had Remove the article
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their
own majority, even significantly different. Correct pronoun usage
its
On the other hand
, only in
the college had Change preposition
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same
amount of men and women Change the article
the same
teachers
.
The majority of female teachers
was
dominantly Unnecessary verb
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happened
in Verb problem
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pre-
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preschool
school
and primary school
, with approximately 95% and upper than 90%, respectively. On secondary
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Secondary
school
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schools
also
had female teachers
as their majority (less than 60%), which was not as significant as pre-school
and primary school
.
Meanwhile, in higher level
of education Fix the agreement mistake
levels
such
as private training institute
and Fix the agreement mistake
institutes
university
in the United Kingdom, Fix the agreement mistake
universities
the
female teacher was the minority. The percentage of male Correct article usage
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teacher
in university was 70% Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
compare
to the female with only 30% of the teacher.Change the form of the verb
compared
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