The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The pie charts below illustrate the retail sectors of sales for online shopping in New Zealand in two years, more precisely in 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, the price for travel consisted in the top 2 in both years. While
prices for books and for music, the film gets last
2 places in 2003 and 2013 respectively.
In 2003 non-offline sales for retail sectors of books had above one-fifth. With such
that results was clothes which had 21%. In the same period, travel had 3% more than one-third. By contrast
, online sales of film and music were approximately one-fourth.
At the other time, non-online produce for retail sectors of clothes had exactly one-third,
which gave him a leader this
year. Travel had 4% less than a leader of this
year. Film and music had one-sixth. And pre-last
figure books had slightly more than one-fifth. This
means his performance in both years was in the range of 19 and 22 per cent respectively.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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