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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 layouts inside the Central Library over 20 years. It's clear that some new facilities for both entertaining and working are relocated to make the whole place more convenient. Standing at the centre place in the library where two tables with chairs were placed, the
room
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 for CDs, videos and computer games on the north-west
side
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 is now used for storytelling events, with two sofas in its north-west
corner
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 and east
side
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 respectively, meanwhile, some children's fiction
books
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 are moved to its south
side
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, facing the computer
room
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 in the south-west
corner
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, where used to be a reading
room
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. At the same time, the corridor now stores all reference
books
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instead
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 of adult fiction
books
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. Looking at the east part of the library, the lecture
room
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 is now situated in the northeast
corner
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, next to the corridor with an information desk in the centre on its south
side
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. By the way, the cafe
room
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 had been moved to the
south-east
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southeast
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corner
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, with 3 self-serve machines on its north
side
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 facing the place of adult fiction
books
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 on the other
side
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 of the desk in the corridor.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, side, corner, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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