The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture provides information on the
proccess
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process
of
bricks
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brick
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manufacture and preparation before sale on the market. As is shown by the photo,
it is clear that
there are 7 stages in the production of building
bricks
. The process begins with the digging of clays
,
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and ends at the delivery stage. Looking in more detail, clays must first be
digged
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dug
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up using a big machine for time efficiency. These clays are passed the metal grid and the roller before being
add
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added
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with sand and water. The brick dough is
then
moulded or
cutted
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cut
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to produce a block shape. At the fourth stage in the process, the wet
bricks
are dried using the drying oven for roughly 24 to 48 hours.
Next,
the
bricks
are burned
with
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moderate and high
temperature
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before
get
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being
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colded inside the cooling chamber for the
last
24 hours.
Last
but not least, The cold
bricks
are stacked and packed up for delivery to the industries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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