You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting?

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Upon entering, unlike the usual decoration of Italian cafes (including brown tables, white porcelain plates and wooden
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), you will encounter a beautiful and pleasant landscape that almost resembles a
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scene or TV series. Entered from the entrance, which is actually a simulated model of a public phone booth And you are faced with tables placed on a paved platform and surrounded by fancy wooden railings.
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artificial windows are installed on the walls of the
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, and the attractive azure
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of the glazed plates on the tables and velvet chairs of the same
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has given a special peace to the environment of the
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. A bright artificial cherry tree with pink blossoms can be seen in the corner of the
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decoration gives you the feeling of sitting
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a real Italian street The menu of Blocaza includes a variety of appetizers, pizza and pasta,
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. And, of course, there are all kinds of hot and cold drinks that are served in a beautiful way, and maybe there are few like them; Like one of the very famous styles of
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, which is decorated with candy and has a very pleasant taste and appearance! The staff of
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complex are very polite and welcoming and you will be greeted warmly upon entering.
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, unlike some similar cafes where the staff try to keep all the customers' orders, the staff of
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collection carefully notes all your orders, so
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is perfect for friendly and family parties and dates for two. The music of
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is soft
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music, traditional Italian From morning to 7:00 p.m., Arabic hookah service is served at Bilokaza, and after that, hookah service ends for the convenience of customers who are allergic to smoke. The prices in Blocaza are economical compared to other cafes in the area!
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greeting and closing
Consider adding a clear greeting at the beginning and a proper closing at the end of your letter to make it feel more complete and formal.
complete response
It would be beneficial to elaborate a bit more on why you think the restaurant is worth visiting, perhaps by including specific examples of the food quality or comparing it with other local restaurants.
logical structure
Your description of the restaurant’s interior and ambiance is vivid and engaging, making it easy for the reader to visualize the setting.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which makes your letter well-organized and easy to follow.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is appropriate and welcoming, which suits the intent of sharing a positive experience.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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