WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the process of electricity generation in a hydroelectric
power
station.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are three steps during the electricity generation, which is starting at a river flowing into a high-level
reservoir
.
Consequently
, the process ends with the outcome of
river
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the river
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getting
low-level
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a low-level
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reservoir
.
Firstly
, the river flows into a high-level
reservoir
with the support of a dam. Turning to the next step, the
water
was
intaked
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taken
by the long pumping which was opened
on
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during
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day
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the day
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and closed at
night
.
Then
the flow of
water
can get to the
power
station and generate electricity through
generator
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a generator
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on
day
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the day
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.
In addition
, the
generator
will
also
work at
night
in order to deliver
water
during pumping at
night
. In terms of
generator
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the generator
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from
power
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the power
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station, it connects the national grid via
power
lines.
And the
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bottom of it is called
reversible
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a reversible
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turbines
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turbine
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, which can operate
generator
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a generator
the generator
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in
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during
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day
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the day
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and pump
water
into
high-level
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a high-level
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reservoir
at
night
.
Consequently
, the
water
can reach the
low level
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low-level
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reservoir
at the end
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "consequently".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, reservoir, water, night, generator with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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