The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The bar chart provides information about five different jobs and salaries in
UK
. The table illustrates Correct article usage
the UK
average
Add an article
the average
of
working hours per week for each profession. Change preposition
apply
It is clear that
underground drivers receive highest
salary Change the article
the highest
while
they work the least.
First of all, fire fighters
and teachers work 55 hours which Correct your spelling
firefighters
was
the highest amount of working time. Wrong verb form
is
However
they do not earn the highest income. Add a comma
However,
Fire fighters
earned 40,000 which slightly increased after three years. Correct your spelling
Firefighters
Similarly
, the figure of
teacher's Change preposition
for
salary
Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
also
displayed an almost similar pattern over time.
On the other hand
, underground driver
who only worked 36 hours per week received the highest salary at 50,000 Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
pounds
when started and slightly over 50,000 pounds
after three years. In contrast
, nurses who worked similar
to underground drivers were paid the lowest at approximately 15,000 Change the word
similarly
pounds
which rose to almost 20,000 pounds
after three years.Submitted by wjddbs2206 on
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