The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The bar chart provides information about five different jobs and salaries in
UK
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. The table illustrates
average
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the average
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of
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working hours per week for each profession.
It is clear that
underground drivers receive
highest
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salary
while
they work the least. First of all,
fire fighters
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and teachers work 55 hours which
was
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the highest amount of working time.
However
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they do not earn the highest income.
Fire fighters
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earned 40,000 which slightly increased after three years.
Similarly
, the figure
of
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teacher's
salary
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salaries
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also
displayed an almost similar pattern over time.
On the other hand
, underground
driver
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drivers
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who only worked 36 hours per week received the highest salary at 50,000
pounds
when started and slightly over 50,000
pounds
after three years.
In contrast
, nurses who worked
similar
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to underground drivers were paid the lowest at approximately 15,000
pounds
which rose to almost 20,000
pounds
after three years.
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