The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
The line chart displays various sources of air pollution in the period between 1990 and 2006 in the United Kingdom.
Overall
, the total amount of air pollution and industrial pollutants reduced over the period,
while
the levels of
households
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and transport pollutants both remained almost the same. The total amount of air pollution decreased significantly from 7
million
tonnes in 1990 to 3
million
in 2005. The industrial negative products declined from just above 5
million
in the beginning to 5
million
tonnes in 1993,
then
showed a steep drop to 3
million
near the end of 1993, before dropping gradually to 2
million
at the end
of the period.
In addition
, both
of
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transportation and
households
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household
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by products
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fluctuated just below 1
million
from 1990 to 2005, despite the fact that transport pollutants reached 1
million
in 2005 and
households
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products almost vanished in 2005.
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