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Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The pie
chart
 illustrates
about
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how garbage manufactured things
dealt
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are dealt
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in
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 the Republic of
Korea
,
Sweden
 and the United Kingdom. There
have classified
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are
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 five different categories. Namely - Recycling, Underground,
Incineration
, Chemical Treatment,
Dumping
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and Dumping
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 at sea. I will
further
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the
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 specific data regarding
this
chart
.
Overall
, the
chart
 depicts the Republic of
Korea
 and
Sweden
 have only three different methods, far
differ
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variety
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varieties
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 of removing
garbages
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garbage
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on
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in
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 having
United
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the United
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 Kingdom.
While
 examining
Korea
 and
Sweden
,
Recycling
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the Recycling
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 method makes up a relatively small proportion of the
chart
 at just 69% in
Korea
, meanwhile,
Incineration
 contributed 9%, which
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the
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a
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 tiny segment of the
chart
. The way of dealing
harm
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with harmful
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 things
on
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in
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underground
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the underground
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 area exceeds that of
by
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13%. According
with
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to
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 the information. In
Sweden
,
way
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the way
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 of
Underground
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the Underground
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 method,
which
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apply
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has approached
at
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55%,
moreover
, Recycling was
second-largest
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the second-largest
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 sector, contributing 25%, in
Sweden
.
Incineration
 remained at 20%. It can be clearly seen
, In
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that in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom Undergrond method is used significantly at 82% rather than other methods.
by
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 contrast, only
small
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a small
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 minority of waste
removing
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removal
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methed
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methods
comes
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come
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 from
Incineration
. next
that
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apply
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, the way of Recycling and Chemical Treatment was roughly equal
8
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by 8
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%
eash
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each
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, korea, sweden, incineration with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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