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The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram presents how many 18-to 25-year-olds used different devices to watch TV shows in 2009 and 2019. In overview, Flat-screen TVs were the most
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 devices to
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, at least one-third of
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 watched videos through conventional TVs in 2009. It was incredible that the majority of
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 watched shows
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 conventional television
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34
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 of
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 and it dramatically decreased to 4
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 in 2019.
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, in 2019, the Use of flat screens became the main trend, which took up the highest
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 among other devices with
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 of 27
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 and it was at least three times the
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 in 2009.
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, in terms of the use of laptops and desktop computers, they both declined to the same
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 of 12
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, which they were 20
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 and 18
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 ten years ago.
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, Mobile phones and tablets were
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 popular with youngsters, other than flat-screen TVs. The
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 of tablets increased over three times more than before and cell phones climbed up as many as 26
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, percent, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • device
  • traditional TV
  • laptop
  • mobile phone
  • tablet
  • streaming services
  • usage
  • trend
  • shift
  • technological advancements
  • viewing habits
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