The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts present the proportions of a variety of resources which produced
electricity
in
France
and Germany in 2009. In general, non-renewable
energy
,
that is
fossil fuel accounted for the largest number (59.6%) among other resources in Germany in 2009.
In contrast
to
France
, the major
energy
was nuclear
power
with the number of 76%, and less conventional thermal
energy
was used. In terms of renewable
power
, the German government made use of biomass, water, sun, and wind to produce
electricity
, of which biomass-producing
power
accounted for over one-third proportion(36.9%);
likewise
,
power
produced by wind comprised 36.9%. The percentages of wind and biomass in Germany were probably three times as much as in
France
where wind-powered
electricity
took up amount of 10.5% and 8.1% was generated by biomass.
On the other hand
, considerable renewable
energy
mainly counted on the water in
France
with the number making up 80.5%. Very little
power
produced by other clean energies,
such
as solar
power
(0.9%) was applied. In a nutshell, the total
electricity
generation(560 kilowatts) made by German plants was larger than that(510 kilowatts) by French plants.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, france, energy, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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