The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British
men
, women
, and children who consumed five parts of fruits and vegetables
in a day between 2001 and 2008, an 8-year period
of time.
Overall
, the percentage
of men
consuming fruit and vegetables
saw an increase while
women
and children witnessed a decrease over the 8-year period
. Though there was a decrease, women
had the highest percentage
who ate fruit and vegetables
in the given period
of time.
From 2001 to 2003, the rate remained steady in the consumption of fruits and vegetables
in terms of men
from less than 20%. Then
, the percentage
increased to more than 20% in 2004 and 27% in 2006. However
, men
witness a decline of 1% to around 26% at the end
of the period
.
Regarding Women
, there was an upward trend from 2001 to 2006. The proportion of eating fruit and vegetables
by women
was just above 20% in 2001 to around 35% in 2006 while
the percentage
of female consumers declined consistently for the next 2 years to 30%. In terms of children, they saw an upward trend throughout the period
though, from the beginning of the period
to 2003, the percentage
was stable to slightly above 10%. On the contrary
, there was a decline from approximately 26% in 2007 to around 24% in 2008.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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