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The table below shows the production of milk in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.

The table below shows the production of milk in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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The given chart delineates the volume of
milk
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 produced by various countries in 3 different years from 1990 to 2010. On the whole,
while
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 the Netherlands, Tanzania and Guatemala seemed to experience an increase throughout the period, with the Netherlands at the top place, the opposite is true for Australia.
To begin
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 with, the Netherlands produced the largest amount of
milk
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, about 11,262,000 litres, in 1990.
Then
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, the figure dropped to 11,155,000 in 2000 before recovering to 11,466,000 10 years later. As to Australia, though its statistics slightly declined from 11 million in 1990 to 9 million in 2010, the country still remained the second-largest
milk
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 producer surveyed. Regarding the statistics of Tanzania and Guatemala, the former was at 87,000, tripling the latter (26,000) in 1990. The next decades saw a continuous upward trend in
milk
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 production in Tanzania, which climbed to over 150,000 in 2010.
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, that of Guatemala
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 skyrocketed, experiencing a growth of approximately 60,000 in the same period.

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