Every year several languages die out. Some poeople think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
On our days, the number of native tongues spoken is declining. In
this
essay, we will discuss why we should protect the dying Linking Words
languages
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and
the consequences that losing these Correct word choice
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languages
will have Use synonyms
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our cultural heritage and how Change preposition
on
this
will affect our society.
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Firstly
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loosing
a Replace the word
losing
tongue
entails the disappearance of the culture Use synonyms
bounded
to that Wrong verb form
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language
and that’s irreplaceable. A classical example of Use synonyms
that is
the loosing of the Latin Linking Words
language
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of Linking Words
thus
, a lot of historical information Linking Words
wrote
in Latin will be incomprehensive and, for that reason, we will lose a huge amount of historical and cultural data. For these reasons, maintaining the Wrong verb form
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in
vital for our cultural Correct your spelling
is
develop
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development
Secondly
, the societies tied to these Linking Words
languages
may disappear if the Use synonyms
language
does. A mother Use synonyms
tongue
is a cohesive agent among the population all around the world. And, Use synonyms
as a consequence
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die
of the native Replace the word
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tongue
those boundaries may disappear, Add a comma
tongue,
thus
dismembering the society. Linking Words
For example
, the Guarani spoken in Perú by the Peruvian natives is a seal of identity among the native communities. Linking Words
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As
consequence
of the loosing of the Guarani, the indigenous people will suffer the loss of one of their most valuable heritages.
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a consequence
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conclusion, the actual number of Change preposition
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languages
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due to
the amount of cultural heritage Linking Words
that is
in danger of being Linking Words
loose
if that Correct your spelling
lost
language
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die
. Change the verb form
dies
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, the societies that spoke that Linking Words
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tongue
may see their bonds disappearing with that Use synonyms
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