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The line graph shows the percentage of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentage of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The Below table illustrates the
exports
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 from
Australia
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 to four other significant countries as US, China, India, and Japan. The line chart summarizes the information on the percentage of
exports
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along with
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 the
years
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 from 1990 to 2012.
In addition
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, only China has increased imports from
Australia
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 during the span of
years
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 from 5% to 28%. A significant portion of the export was done after the 2000s.
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, the line chart
also
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 illustrates that
exports
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 from
Australia
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 to
US
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the US
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 and India fluctuated in the
years
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 2000 and 2012.
However
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, the trade with Japan decreased dramatically between the year 1990 and 2000s from 26% to 16%.
Afterward
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, the trend of the graph becomes less decreasing in nature. The stable line chart provides information about
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% decrease in goods exported from
Australia
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 to
this
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 country. In conclusion, for the initial few
years
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 exporting of goods from
Australia
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 to Japan
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 at the top but since other countries started their goods
exports
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, the graph started to decline.
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