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The line graph shows the percentage of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentage of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The Below table illustrates the
exports
 from
Australia
 to four other significant countries as US, China, India, and Japan. The line chart summarizes the information on the percentage of
exports
along with
 the
years
 from 1990 to 2012.
In addition
, only China has increased imports from
Australia
 during the span of
years
 from 5% to 28%. A significant portion of the export was done after the 2000s.
Furthermore
, the line chart
also
 illustrates that
exports
 from
Australia
 to
US
Correct article usage
the US
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 and India fluctuated in the
years
 2000 and 2012.
However
, the trade with Japan decreased dramatically between the year 1990 and 2000s from 26% to 16%.
Afterward
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Afterwards
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, the trend of the graph becomes less decreasing in nature. The stable line chart provides information about
10
Correct article usage
a 10
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% decrease in goods exported from
Australia
 to
this
 country. In conclusion, for the initial few
years
 exporting of goods from
Australia
 to Japan
were
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was
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 at the top but since other countries started their goods
exports
, the graph started to decline.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, australia, years with synonyms.
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