You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart represents information about what
are
children in Australia Unnecessary verb
apply
doing
when they have leisure time. Wrong verb form
do
Overall
it can be seen that,
most children spend their time Remove the comma
apply
to watch
television or video games. Change the verb form
watching
In contrast
, the least activity they do is skateboarding or rollerblading.
To begin
with, boys
in Australia use their
39 per Correct pronoun usage
apply
cent
of their leisure time to play skateboarding or rollerblading. On the other hand
, the percentage of the girls
only 23 per cent
, in the same activity. Afterwards, boys
Correct article usage
the boys
at
there who ride bicycles is 78 per Change preposition
apply
cent
. On the contrary
, the girls
who play this
only 59 per cent
. After that, watching TV or video games are
the most activity they like. Both Correct subject-verb agreement
is
boys
and girls
have same
percentage, which is 100 per Change the article
the same
cent
.
Besides
that, the boys
who like to play electronic or computer games is around 81 per Correct quantifier usage
number of boys
cent
. However
, the girls
is
not too like it because the percentage Verb problem
do
just
about 60 per Add a missing verb
is just
cent
. On
the Change preposition
In
last
category, the boys
who like art
and Fix the agreement mistake
arts
craft
Correct subject-verb agreement
crafts
approximately
38 per Add a missing verb
are approximately
cent
while
the girls
59
per Add a missing verb
are 59
cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, cent, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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