The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The chart illustrates the percentage of individuals who ate fruits and vegetables five times daily, over the span of 8 years, segregated by gender.
At first glance, there can be seen an
overall
positive trend. Women have been the highest consumers of fruits & vegetables, retaining the highest share in each year. They initially
had just over 20% and climbed even higher to about 35% in 2006, however
, this
increase was temporary as the next two years witnessed a steep decline of 5%.
Moreover
, men and children had quite similar patterns, both maintaining their recorder levels uptill
2004Correct your spelling
up till
,
and growing every year slightly till 2006. Children Remove the comma
apply
however
had a higher rate of growth 2007
onwards as it continued to reach closer to men.
Change preposition
from 2007
Overall
, the graph depicts the rise in vegetable consumption in the first decade of the twentieth century amongst everyone, with a small dip after 2006.Submitted by tahirascm11 on
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