The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the number of
internet
users
in Greece,
Denmark
, and Canada from 1998 to 2013, over a period of 15 years, alongside the world average for those years. In general terms, it can be clearly seen that
Denmark
and Canada had considerably more
Internet
users
than the others,
while
the Greeks used fewer
Internet
.
In addition
, the amounts of
Internet
usage in all countries increased throughout the period shown. Turning to the graph in more detail, in 1998, 26
thousand
Canadians used the
Internet
,
whereas
approximately 21
thousand
Denmark
people, and a
thousand
Greeks. By 2003, the number of
Internet
users
in
Denmark
had ascended to 79
thousand
and surpassed Canada. In the meantime, that of the Greeks had experienced a climb of 20thousand people. Between 2008 and 2013, the figures for
Denmark
continued to climb, reaching a peak of 92
thousand
in 2013.
Also
, Greece experienced gains of about 20,000 new
users
.
Although
the world average increased as well, the gap between it and the three countries included in the chart widened
at the end
of the period in question.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, users, denmark, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internet penetration
  • Trend
  • Growth rate
  • Increase/decrease
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant
  • Average
  • Fluctuation
  • Plateau
  • Surge
  • Spike
  • Decline
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