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The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave a ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave a ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented table compares data about the proportion of new students who are satisfied with 3 various college courses'
resources
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, it is important that all of them have nice percentages and the best
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 is
commerce
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,fLaw has good results in Other
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while
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 two others have the best scores at teaching.
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 at 59% does not have the best amount of pre-course information ;
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law
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 at 72% has the second level and the main
one
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 is
commerce
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 at 95%. For the teaching
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 the prior best
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 does not change but economies improve and reach the same percentage as
commerce
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;
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, the
law
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 is 10% less than the
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commerce
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 by 93% touch the first stage;
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,
economics
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 is 3% less than the previous
one
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 and
law
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 is 76%. The graph demonstrates in
Resources
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 ( print),which the trend of lessons is the same as the
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 sector,
commerce
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,
economics
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, and
law
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 respectively 85%, 81% and 70%. Other
resources
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 have the same faction as the pre-course information owing to the fact that
commerce
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 is 81% and the
law
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 has a 1% increase from it after that
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economics
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 by 60%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words resources, one, commerce, economics, law with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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