The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.
The bar graph gives information about the number of
people
who were in emergency care offices of different ages at hospital
in Northern Ireland in the same month December of two year 2016 and 2017.
In general, the youngest and the oldest were Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
these
Correct determiner usage
the
groups
which had the highest people
for emergency care in 2 those months. Correct quantifier usage
number of people
In addition
, the number of patients in December 2017 was slightly higher than last
December.
It is clearly seen that babies who were under 5 and those aged 75 and over people
had a higher point than other groups
but the people
who were over 74 accounted for the highest point, at around 64 attendances per 1000 population.
Turning to the other groups
of age, the people
who were 5 -15 had the lowest patients
who came to emergency care, just stood at slightly over 20. Correct quantifier usage
number of patients
Moreover
, those aged 16 – 74 showed a similar pattern. That groups
had approximately 32 Fix the agreement mistake
group
people
who had to visit hospital
in Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
that
months of 2016 and 2017.Correct determiner usage
the
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