The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The bar charts

illustrates

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the percentage of

computer

ownerships

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ownership

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among all people between 2002 and 2010,

as well as

the percentage of

computer

owner

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owners

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by different

level

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levels

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of

education

during

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2002 to 2010.

Overall

, it is evident that

this

data showed a

stedily

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steady

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increase in

computer

ownerships

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ownership

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over time, with significant growth observed in all

education

levels.

Higher

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level

of

education

consistently correlated with

higher

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a higher

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rate of

computer

ownerships

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ownership

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thorughtout

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throughout

the period. In

term

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of

overall

computer

ownerships

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, the percentages increased gradually from around 55%

2002

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to approximately 70% by 2010. The most notable growth

occured

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occurred

occurs

between 2006 and 2008, when

oweships

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ownerships

ownership

rose from roughly 60% to 70%.

According to

the data

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categorised

by

level

of

education

, those with no high school diploma had

te

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lowest

computer

ownerships

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ownership

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, starting at under 20% in 2002 and rising to about 40% in 2010.

In

contrast

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individuals with

postgraduational

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postgraduation

qualification

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qualifications

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had the highest rates of

ownerships

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ownership

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,

increaseing

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increasing

from 75% in 2002 to almost 95% by 2010. A

similiar

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similar

upward trend was observed in the other educational levels, with notable increases across the board.

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example

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ownerships

among high school

graudates

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graduates

rose from approximately 35% in 2002 to nearly 70 % in 2010. In summary,

computer

ownerships

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ownership

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grew significantly between 2002 and 2010, with

education

level

being a major factor in

ownerships

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rates. The higher the

level

of

education

, the more likely

indiviudals

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individuals

were to own a

computer

, and

this

pattern remained consistent over

ther

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the

period.