The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates the proportion of students attending four types of secondary
schools
between 2000 and 2009.
Overall
, attendance
increased in community schools
than in the other three types of schools
from 2000 to 2009. Although
initially
the highest Add a comma
initially,
students
Fix the agreement mistake
student
attendance
were
in Voluntary-controlled Correct subject-verb agreement
was
schools
. In 2000, the highest proportion of attendance
was in voluntary-controlled schools
, whis
was 52% and by 2003 had decreased to 20%. The lowest Correct your spelling
which
this
attendance
were
in Change the verb form
was
speacialist
Correct your spelling
specialist
schools
and community schools
in 2000, which were
12%, but despite Correct subject-verb agreement
was
this
, attendance
in community schools
increased to 58% and in specialist schools
declined slightly by 2% in 2009. And, also
during this
period
there was a drop in Add a comma
period,
attendance
from 24% to 12% in grammar schools
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