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The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the
number
 of people who stay in four
countries
 in Southeast
Asian
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Asia
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 between 1970 and 2020
,
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apply
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 and the prediction
in
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for
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 twenty years later.
Overall
, the trend
increase
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increases
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 with the highest
grow
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is
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in
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Malaysia
 and the lowest
is
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in
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Thailand
. In 1970,
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 was
country
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the country
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 with the highest population that stood at above 30% followed by
Malaysia
,
Thailand
, and Indonesia in 30%, 19%, and 15% each. Afterward, the three
countries
were
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had
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 a gradual rise
in
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from
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 1980 to 2010.
In Contrast
,
Population
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the Population
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 in
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the philippines
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philippines
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Philippines
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decline
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declined
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around
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by around
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 10%
during
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between
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 2000 and 2010 which earlier rose to approximately 50%.
Furthermore
, In 2020 the
percentages
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percentage
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 in
Malaysia
was reach
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reached
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up to
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apply
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about 75% which
it
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apply
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was the highest
number
 among
4
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the 4
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ASEAN
countries
whereas
Thailand
becoming
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became
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a
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the
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 country with the lowest
percentages
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percentage
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in
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apply
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below 30%. Meanwhile, In the decent
period
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period,
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 the
number
 of people will continue to grow
while
 in 2030 and 2040
Malaysia
 will lead by around 80%,
this
number
 is the highest prediction of
citizen
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citizens
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 in 4 ASEAN
countries
, and Indonesia will become the second country by almost 60%
while
 Philippines and
Thailand
 in below 50%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, countries, malaysia, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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