Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
I am writing to enquire that a bag
lost
during my return to London from Colombo.
I was returning from Colombo airport to London on 09 September 2024 in Sri Lankan Add a missing verb
was lost
Airline
flight number AO123, where I sat on window seat number 46 and kept my hand luggage in the cabin above my seat. Soon after reaching the hotel, I realized that the bag Fix the agreement mistake
Airlines
was forgot
to takeChange the verb form
was forgotten
,
when I got off Remove the comma
apply
from
the airbus. I could not lodge a complaint at the Airport as I just knew Change preposition
apply
this
. The luggage that is
made with black colour Wrong verb form
was
lather
material, and Correct your spelling
leather
had
a red Wrong verb form
has
color
small size star Change the spelling
colour
center
Change the spelling
centre
of
the front side. Inside the Change preposition
on
bag
there were Add a comma
bag,
few
clothes, which were materially insignificant ,and had my silver colour Correct article usage
a few
dell
laptop with my name on a sticker on Capitalize word
Dell
front
side.
I would Add an article
the front
really
grateful to you, if you could check with your cabin crew or the cleaning team whether they have Add a missing verb
be really
came
Change the form of the verb
come
a cross
the said or not. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Aravinda Jayaweera
Mob No - 7787231442Correct your spelling
across
Submitted by aravindasajith on
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coherence cohesion
Break down the information into smaller paragraphs to improve readability and ensure each paragraph conveys a single main idea.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about where and when you lost the bag to make the explanation clearer.
task achievement
The letter provides a clear explanation of what happened, a description of the bag and its contents, and a request for action.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for a formal request.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, making it suitable for a formal letter.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.