The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of
employment
,
education
rate
and average revenue in eight European
countries
in the year 2015.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that the
employment
rate
is higher in
Norway
whereas
it the less recorded in Greece. When compared to the
education
rate
and average income of both
countries
were higher in
Norway
. In terms of
Employment
rate
recorded the highest in
Norway
, which is nearly three quarters (74.8%), and the lowest was registered in Greece with 50.8%.
Uk
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and Austria both
countries
contribute significant amounts accounting for 72.7% and 71.1% respectively. Other
countries
made up more or less between 50% to 70%. When considering the university
education
statistics
Norway
is the country that
contribute
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contributes
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the highest
rate
of 43.2%,
while
the least was Portugal , which constituted only 22.9% which is half of
Norway
. Luxemburg and
UK
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the UK
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also
recorded a considerable
rate
of
education
. Even though the
employment
rate
is high in Bulgaria , the average income is less .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, education, rate, countries, norway with synonyms.
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