The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The graph illustrates the number of turtle
population
in four different types from 1980 to 2012 in India.
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populations
Overall
, it is evident that the population
of all species turtles
showed the most stable growth throughout the periods. Despite the fluctuations, Olive Ridley Change preposition
of turtles
Turtles
exhibited an increase
trend, Change the verb form
increasing
whereas
Leatherback Turtle and Olive Ridle
Turtle showed Correct your spelling
Ridley
population
decrease across the years.
In 1980, the Correct article usage
a population
population
numbers of all turtles
types were at 100. The number of Olive Ridle
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Ridley
turtles
population
gradually increased, peaking nearly to
140 by 1997. It Change preposition
apply
then
experienced fluctuation before marginally dropped
approximately to 130 by 2012. Meanwhile, all species type of Wrong verb form
dropping
turtles
showed steadily
variation numbers Change the word
steady
around
110 across the years, amounting to roughly 109 in 2012
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of around
On the other hand
, Green turtles
demonstrated increasing population
shifts until 1984, before notably declined
to just about 90 by the end of Wrong verb form
declining
period
. Add an article
the period
While
Leatherback
Correct article usage
the Leatherback
turtles
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turtle
population
rose to just about 110 before 1988, it then
sharply dropped to below 60 by 2012.Submitted by chocolate10
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