The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
percentage
of people who live in the
city
in four different countries over a period of 50
years
, and the projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Malaysia has the largest
city
population
over the period shown, and it is anticipated to maintain
this
trend
for future
years
.
Moreover
, the
percentage
of
city
population
in four countries has risen over 50
years
(1970-2020) In 1970, Malaysia and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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had the same urban
population
about of 30%,
while
Thailand with approximately 20% was the third country, and Indonesia had the lowest
percentage
of 13%. After ten
years
, in 1980, the
percentage
of the urban
population
in Malaysia rose dramatically to a peak of 78% in 2020, and is projected to continue
this
trend
and will touch 85% in 2040. The
percentage
of the
city
population
in both Indonesia and Thailand experienced an upward
trend
and had the same urban
population
percentage
in 2000, but after that, the growth of Indonesia was noticeable to reach 50% in 2020 and is projected to touch 65% in 2040.
In contrast
, the urban
population
in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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had a
fluctuation
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trend
from 1970 to 2020 with the maximum
percentage
by 1990 being around 50% and is predicted to increase and experience 52% by 2040.
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