U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the information that fuel
consumptions
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consumption
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such
as petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar and hydropower
of
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the USA from 1980 to 2030. Units are measured by
quandrillion
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quadrillion
quadrillions
.
Overall
, it can
see
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that petrol and oil
was
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the highest
consumptions
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consumption
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of fuels and in the future
prediction
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also
will be the highest. Nuclear, solar and hydropower are the least. In detail, at the beginning of the period, petrol and oil
was
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the highest consumptions in the USA, at 35 and there was a fluctuation from 1980 to 1995 and it reached 32,
then
it
was
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increased significantly by 18 in 2020,
afterthat
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, there was a slight growth by 5 and it will increase mildly in the future, at 50 in 2030.
Similarly
, coal had 15 in 1980 and it peaked in 2000, at 23, there was a slight growth from 1995 to 2030, from 23 to 30. Natural gas
had
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fluctuation from 1980 to 2015, from 20 to 23,
there after
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, there
is
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a
pleatea
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pleated
plateau
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from 2015 to 2030.
Furthermore
, nuclear, solar and hydropower, these fuels were not used more than other fuels and future
prediction
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will not any significant growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • fuel sources
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • renewable energy
  • hydroelectric
  • solar
  • wind
  • fossil fuels
  • upward trend
  • fluctuations
  • nuclear energy
  • steady increase
  • environmental concerns
  • technological advancements
  • projections
  • reliant
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