U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the information that fuel
consumptions
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consumption
such
as petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar and hydropower of
the USA from 1980 to 2030. Units are measured by Change preposition
in
quandrillion
.
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quadrillion
quadrillions
Overall
, it can see
that petrol and oil Wrong verb form
be seen
was
the highest Change the verb form
were
consumptions
of fuels and in the future Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
prediction
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predictions
also
will be the highest. Nuclear, solar and hydropower are the least.
In detail, at the beginning of the period, petrol and oil was
the highest consumptions in the USA, at 35 and there was a fluctuation from 1980 to 1995 and it reached 32, Change the verb form
were
then
it was
increased significantly by 18 in 2020, Unnecessary verb
apply
afterthat
, there was a slight growth by 5 and it will increase mildly in the future, at 50 in 2030.
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after that
Similarly
, coal had 15 in 1980 and it peaked in 2000, at 23, there was a slight growth from 1995 to 2030, from 23 to 30. Natural gas had
fluctuation from 1980 to 2015, from 20 to 23, Unnecessary verb
apply
there after
, there Correct your spelling
thereafter
is
a Wrong verb form
was
pleatea
from 2015 to 2030.
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pleated
plateau
plate
Furthermore
, nuclear, solar and hydropower, these fuels were not used more than other fuels and future prediction
will not any significant growth.Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
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