U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

#energy #consumption #minutes #fuel #information #features #comparisons

The line graph illustrates the information that fuel

consumptions

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consumption

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such

as petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar and hydropower

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the USA from 1980 to 2030. Units are measured by

quandrillion

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quadrillion

quadrillions

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, it can

see

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that petrol and oil

was

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the highest

consumptions

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consumption

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of fuels and in the future

prediction

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also

will be the highest. Nuclear, solar and hydropower are the least. In detail, at the beginning of the period, petrol and oil

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the highest consumptions in the USA, at 35 and there was a fluctuation from 1980 to 1995 and it reached 32,

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increased significantly by 18 in 2020,

afterthat

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after that

, there was a slight growth by 5 and it will increase mildly in the future, at 50 in 2030.

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, coal had 15 in 1980 and it peaked in 2000, at 23, there was a slight growth from 1995 to 2030, from 23 to 30. Natural gas

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fluctuation from 1980 to 2015, from 20 to 23,

there after

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, there

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pleatea

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pleated

plateau

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from 2015 to 2030.

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, nuclear, solar and hydropower, these fuels were not used more than other fuels and future

prediction

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will not any significant growth.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

196 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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environmental concerns
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U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

scientists and news media are pesenting ever more evidence of climate. Government can not expect to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. give your opinion

Some people claim that public museum and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.