You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the information that
consumptions
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consumption
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of everyday
calorie
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calories
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by three various basic
food
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foods
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such
as
rice
,
wheat
, and
maize
in four different countries like
Cambodi
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Cambodia
, Poland, Egypt and Mexico.
Overall
, it can be seen that
,
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apply
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Poland does not
spent
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spend
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more money
for
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on
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food even one of the basic foods, which is
Maize
. In detail,
rice
is the largest consumption by
Cambodi
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Cambodia
, and Poland is the least
rice
consumers, which is 1445
calories
and 19 respectively.
Cambodi
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Cambodia
takes 18
calorie
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calories
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per
day
by using
wheat
and 103
calorie
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calories
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is taken by
maize
. Egyptians take more
calorie
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calories
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by using
wheat
, at 1095 per
day
while
they take 578 and 501
calories
from
maize
and
rice
respectively.
Furthermore
,
Mexico
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people take more
calories
per
day
by eating
maize
, at 1083 but they take
least
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the least
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calories
by
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from
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rice
, which is 57, and 275
calories
are taken from
wheat
. Surprisingly, Polandars eat more
wheat
for taking more
calories
per
day
, which is 865 but they do not eat
maize
for their
calories
and
rice
also
they do not like to eat
ans
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and
get
calories
from that, at 19
calories
only per
day
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words calorie, rice, wheat, maize, calories, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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