You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The table illustrates the information that

consumptions

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consumption

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of everyday

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calorie

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calories

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by three various basic

food

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foods

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such

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rice

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wheat

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, and

maize

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in four different countries like

Cambodi

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Cambodia

, Poland, Egypt and Mexico.

Overall

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, it can be seen that

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apply

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Poland does not

spent

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more money

for

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food even one of the basic foods, which is

Maize

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. In detail,

rice

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is the largest consumption by

Cambodi

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Cambodia

, and Poland is the least

rice

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consumers, which is 1445

calories

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and 19 respectively.

Cambodi

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Cambodia

takes 18

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calorie

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calories

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per

day

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by using

wheat

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and 103

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calorie

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is taken by

maize

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. Egyptians take more

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calorie

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calories

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by using

wheat

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, at 1095 per

day

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while

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they take 578 and 501

calories

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from

maize

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and

rice

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respectively.

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Mexico

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Mexican

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people take more

calories

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per

day

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by eating

maize

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, at 1083 but they take

least

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the least

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calories

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from

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rice

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, which is 57, and 275

calories

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are taken from

wheat

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. Surprisingly, Polandars eat more

wheat

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for taking more

calories

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per

day

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, which is 865 but they do not eat

maize

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for their

calories

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and

rice

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also

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they do not like to eat

ans

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and

get

calories

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from that, at 19

calories

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only per

day

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words calorie, rice, wheat, maize, calories, day with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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