You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the information that
consumptions
of everyday Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
calorie
by three various basic Fix the agreement mistake
calories
food
Fix the agreement mistake
foods
such
as rice
, wheat
, and maize
in four different countries like Cambodi
, Poland, Egypt and Mexico.
Correct your spelling
Cambodia
Overall
, it can be seen that,
Poland does not Remove the comma
apply
spent
more money Change the verb form
spend
for
food even one of the basic foods, which is Change preposition
on
Maize
.
In detail, rice
is the largest consumption by Cambodi
, and Poland is the least Correct your spelling
Cambodia
rice
consumers, which is 1445 calories
and 19 respectively. Cambodi
takes 18 Correct your spelling
Cambodia
calorie
per Change to a plural noun
calories
day
by using wheat
and 103 calorie
is taken by Change to a plural noun
calories
maize
. Egyptians take more calorie
by using Fix the agreement mistake
calories
wheat
, at 1095 per day
while
they take 578 and 501 calories
from maize
and rice
respectively.
Furthermore
, Mexico
people take more Replace the word
Mexican
calories
per day
by eating maize
, at 1083 but they take least
Correct article usage
the least
calories
by
Change preposition
from
rice
, which is 57, and 275 calories
are taken from wheat
. Surprisingly, Polandars eat more wheat
for taking more calories
per day
, which is 865 but they do not eat maize
for their calories
and rice
also
they do not like to eat ans
get Correct your spelling
and
calories
from that, at 19 calories
only per day
.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words calorie, rice, wheat, maize, calories, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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