The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show six categories of
energy
capacity
in gigawats
in 2012 and in 2030. Correct your spelling
gigawatts
gigawatt
Overall
, fossil fuels, renewables and nuclear will decrease while
other energy
capacities such
as wind, solar and flexibility capacity
will increase.
According to
the first pie chart
the highest Add a comma
chart,
percent point
of fossil fuels was 64%, Correct your spelling
percentage
renewables
had almost Correct word choice
and renewables
Correct article usage
a quater
quater
of all Correct your spelling
quarter
energy
capacity
. Moreover
, wind and nuclear had particularly the same percentages 5% and 6% respectively. Other
2 categories: solar and flexibility Correct article usage
The other
capacity
was
allocated Correct subject-verb agreement
were
on
2% and 1%. In 2030, Change preposition
at
by
scientists Change preposition
apply
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prediction,
prediction
the situation will change. Fossil fuels will stay a leader with 44%. Solar Replace the word
predict
willl
have a significant increase from 2% to 18%, Correct your spelling
will
also
wind will increase too from 5% to 12%, while
renewables will lose 3 percent
points. Flexible Change the spelling
per cent
capacity
will show a
stability without significant changes, the same situation with nuclear.
In conclusion, Remove the article
apply
the
half of all categories will be changed Correct article usage
apply
on
no more than 3%, Change preposition
by
while
other energy
capacities will hace
Correct your spelling
have
a significant changes
both positively and negatively.Correct the article-noun agreement
significant changes
a significant change
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