The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the
process
of producing recycled products from the plastic waste.
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Overall
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it is clear that
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this
is a cyclic Linking Words
process
, starting with waste disposal, Use synonyms
then
reclamation, and Linking Words
then
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finally
transforming into finished goods. Linking Words
This
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process
can be divided into two parts: Use synonyms
collection
and processing.
The Use synonyms
collection
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process
starts right after the designated recycling trash containers get filled, once out of capacity; the trash Use synonyms
collection
vehicles arrive and load it up in their chambers. Use synonyms
Then
they deliver them to the recycling centres, where the plastic trash is sorted Linking Words
according to
various shapes, colours, and volumes.
Once the Linking Words
collection
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process
ends, these massive quantities of garbage pieces are compressed into square blocks. These blocks are Use synonyms
then
crushed using a thresher that breaks these cubicles into coarse-grain particles. Linking Words
Then
, these particles are thoroughly washed to remove organic residue. Linking Words
After
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this
, they are Linking Words
further
chopped down into even fine-grain pellets, and Linking Words
then
they are heated at immense temperatures to form solid blocks of raw materials. Linking Words
Finally
, these processed materials are Linking Words
then
used to produce polythene items and textile goods as well.Linking Words
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