The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the
process
of producing recycled products from the plastic waste.
Overall
,
it is clear that
this
is a cyclic
process
, starting with waste disposal,
then
reclamation, and
then
finally
transforming into finished goods.
This
process
can be divided into two parts:
collection
and processing. The
collection
process
starts right after the designated recycling trash containers get filled, once out of capacity; the trash
collection
vehicles arrive and load it up in their chambers.
Then
they deliver them to the recycling centres, where the plastic trash is sorted
according to
various shapes, colours, and volumes. Once the
collection
process
ends, these massive quantities of garbage pieces are compressed into square blocks. These blocks are
then
crushed using a thresher that breaks these cubicles into coarse-grain particles.
Then
, these particles are thoroughly washed to remove organic residue.
After
this
, they are
further
chopped down into even fine-grain pellets, and
then
they are heated at immense temperatures to form solid blocks of raw materials.
Finally
, these processed materials are
then
used to produce polythene items and textile goods as well.
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