The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
consumption
of fish and also
some different kinds of meat which is [ Lamb ,Beef
, Chicken
] in a European nations
over 25 years from 1979 to 2004. Units are measured in grams per person per Correct the article-noun agreement
a European nation
European nations
weak
.
Correct your spelling
week
Overall
, it is obvious that the consumption
of beef
, lamb, and fish went down over the given years, while
for chicken
, it went up. In the first 15 years beef
was the most popular meat which was chicken
from 1949 to 2004 the most consumed food in the final year
.
With regards to the consumption
of beef
, it started at almost 225 in 1979 and then
decline
Wrong verb form
declined
at
around 100 in the final Change preposition
to
year
. Similarly
, lamb its
began at nearly 150 in the first Correct pronoun usage
apply
year
and then
went down at
Correct your spelling
a
alittle
more than 50 in 2004. Correct your spelling
a little
Likewise
, fish it
started at about 50 in 1979 and Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
decreased to alittle
less than 50 in the final Correct your spelling
a little
year
.
On the other hand
, as for the consumption
of chicken
, it started at just over 150 in 1979 after which it rocketed to just below 250 in the final year
.Submitted by s_syedy on
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