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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two tables provide data on the
sales
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 of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 and bananas in five European countries (
UK
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,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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,
Belgium
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, and
Sweden
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) in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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,
coffee
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sales
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 increased in all five countries between 1999 and 2004, with the
UK
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 showing the most significant growth. Banana
sales
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also
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 rose across most countries, with the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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, and
Denmark
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 experiencing substantial increases,
while
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Belgium
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 and
Sweden
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 saw a decline. In 1999,
Switzerland
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 had the highest
coffee
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sales
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 at 3
million
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euros
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, followed by
Denmark
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 (1.8
million
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), the
UK
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 (1.5
million
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),
Belgium
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 (1
million
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), and
Sweden
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 (0.8
million
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). By 2004,
coffee
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sales
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 in the
UK
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 soared to 20
million
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euros
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,
while
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Switzerland
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's doubled to 6
million
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euros
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.
Denmark
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,
Belgium
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, and
Sweden
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 saw smaller increases, with
sales
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 reaching 2
million
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, 1.7
million
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, and 1
million
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euros
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, respectively. For bananas, the
UK
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 had the highest
sales
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 in both years, starting at 15
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and rising dramatically to 47
million
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euros
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 by 2004.
Switzerland
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 saw its banana
sales
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 increase from 1
million
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euros
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 to 5.5
million
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,
while
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Denmark
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's
sales
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 rose from 0.6
million
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 to 4
million
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.
Conversely
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, banana
sales
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 in
Belgium
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 and
Sweden
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 fell by half, from 1.8
million
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 to 1
million
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 in
Belgium
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 and from 2
million
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 to 0.9
million
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 in
Sweden
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, uk, switzerland, denmark, belgium, sweden, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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