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The charts below give information on the location and type of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending

The charts below give information on the location and type of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending
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The charts below provide details on the locations and types of
dance
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classes
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 that young people in a town in Australia are participating in.
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most
dance
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classes
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 take place in private studios, and ballet is the most popular
dance
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 style for younger
children
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. Private studios had the most
classes
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, with 48% of all
dance
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classes
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 held there.
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 halls
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 the next most common place, with 24%. Community halls and other places had 18% of the
classes
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, and college-based studios had the fewest, with 10%. Looking at the types of
dance
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 by age ballet is very popular
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children
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 under 11, with 600
students
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.
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, fewer older
children
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, ages 11-16 take ballet
classes
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 with only 300
students
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. For tap
dance
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, less than 500 under 11 take
classes
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, but the number of
students
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 in the 11-16 age group is higher, just over 400. Modern
dance
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 has 300
students
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 under 11, but more than 500
students
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 in the 11-16 age group are interested in it, showing that more older
children
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 like modern
dance
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes, children, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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