The charts below give information on the location and type of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending
The charts below provide details on the locations and types of
dance
classes
that young people in a town in Australia are participating in.
Overall
, the
most Correct article usage
apply
dance
classes
take place in private studios, and ballet is the most popular dance
style for younger children
.
Private studios had the most classes
, with 48% of all dance
classes
held there. Schoo
halls Correct your spelling
School
was
the next most common place, with 24%. Community halls and other places had 18% of the Change the verb form
were
classes
, and college-based studios had the fewest, with 10%.
Looking at the types of dance
by age ballet is very popular to
Change preposition
with
children
under 11, with 600 students
. However
, fewer older children
, ages 11-16 take ballet classes
with only 300 students
. For tap dance
, less than 500 under 11 take classes
, but the number of students
in the 11-16 age group is higher, just over 400. Modern dance
has 300 students
under 11, but more than 500 students
in the 11-16 age group are interested in it, showing that more older children
like modern dance
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