The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
The two
bars
graph Change the noun form
bar
illustrate
the references for Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
students
to pursue their study
program and how much support
they gain from employers over four different group
of ages. Units are measured in percentages.
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groups
Overall
, it can be seen that the students
that opt study
for their career needs showed a downward trend as soon as they get older, whilst Fix the infinitive
to study
study
for interest needs Wrong verb form
studying
were
becoming popular when the Unnecessary verb
apply
students
in the oldest age
group
. On the other hand
, students
had a
biggest Change the article
the
support
from their colleges
under 26 Replace the word
colleagues
years
and the lowest support
from 30
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the 30
age
group
.
In terms of the reasons for study
, the students
under 40 years
were choose
to Wrong verb form
chose
study
due to
their career growth started at precisely 80% under 26 years
and showed a significant decreased
by around 12% of Replace the word
decrease
30
-39 Correct article usage
the 30
age
of
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apply
group
. Then
, they remained similar at
percentages in Change preposition
in
40
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the 40
age
of
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apply
group
at exactly 40%, whilst they changed their references to interest needs in Correct article usage
the group
group
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groups
of
over 49 Change preposition
apply
years
old at precisely 70%.
Regarding of
the employer’s Change preposition
apply
support
, the students
had a huge support
from their co-worker
under 26 Fix the agreement mistake
co-workers
years
old for just above 60% and witnessed a gradual decline over the oldest age
group
from 26-29 years
old to 30-39 years
old by nearly 30%. However
, this
figure increased gradually from approximately 35% in 40
-49 Correct article usage
the 40
age
of
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apply
group
and reached at
40% over 49 Change preposition
apply
years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, study, support, group, age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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