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46.The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

46.The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates what
did
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apply
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the UK unemployed spent their
time
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 on
last
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 year.
Overall
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,
both
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men
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 and
women
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 in the UK
last
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 year
has
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had
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 different most and least done activities in the mornings,
while
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 in the afternoon
both
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men
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 and
women
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 spent
least
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the least
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 of their
time
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 staying in bed. In the morning
men
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 spent most of their
time
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 on job hunting with 22% and least on drinking with 2%,
while
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women
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 spent most of their
time
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 on housework with approximately 50% and least on playing sports and drinking with
both
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 1%. In the afternoon
men
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 spent most of their
time
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 on TV
with
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at
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 4% and
least
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the least
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on
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apply
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staying
bed
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in bed
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with
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at
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 1%,
while
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women
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 spent most of their
time
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 on housework
with
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at
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 21% and least
on
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apply
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staying
bed
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in bed
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 and playing
sport
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sports
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with
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at
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both
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 0%.
Women
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 spent
same
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the same
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 amount of
time
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 on decorating, walking, nothing/sitting around in the morning with 3%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, both, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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