The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in  Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
The line chart illustrates the transition of three different areas of crime
such
as Burglary, Car Theft and
Robbery
in Newport City Centre between 2003 and 2012. In 2003, Burglary was the highest among the other two different areas of crime, about 3400
incidents
happened and in the following year, it reached a peak at 3700
incidents
.
Then
the
number
dropped drastically from 2004 until 2008 to under 1500
incidents
followed by a fluctuation until 2012. In 2003, 2700 car thefts were recorded in Newport City. Yet, for the next two years, the
number
of these crimes only experienced a minor change ranging from 50 to 100 before falling to approximately 2100 crime acts in 2006. The
number
was erratic until 2012 when it ended and made up about 2300 criminalities recorded.
Robbery
was the lowest criminality done by the citizens of Newport City, which accounted for 600 criminals caught during the year. For a decade, the
number
of robbers who were caught fluctuated ranging from 500 to 800.
Overall
, during the ten-year period. Car Theft became the highest
number
of
incidents
compared to Burglary and
Robbery
. Meanwhile, the
number
of
incidents
of
robbery
was still the lowest point
in
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the end of the period.
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